Furture perspective

I will still choose English as my major in college. Because I have a strong interest in English, and I hope I can make great progress in studying English, and strengthen my English communication ability after I go to a university.  And I think Department of English, National Taipei University of Technology is my best choice for me, and I sincerely hope that I can be admitted to your school. Besides, I consider that I can polish my English ability a lot in your university. I will make use of the four years to reinforce my English. In addition, I would also learn some different languages like Japanese and Korean.

After graduating from your college, I will pursue a career like an English teacher or a tour guide.  Both of these two jobs require a lot of knowledge and a better command of English.

If I can enter Department of English, National Taipei University of Technology, I will study hard and make more efforts to sharpen my English, especially my English listening and speaking abilities. In the future, I will enhance my every aspects of study and try my best to achieve my goal step by step.

Self-Evaluation

I am an optimistic girl who always looks on the bright side.    Whenever I get into trouble, I would try hard to conquer it in order to get away from it. I do everything with all my efforts. As long as I start to do one thing, I would never give up until I think that I really do my possible. At school, I am very friendly to my friends and classmates. Besides, I am a person of  honor,  once I promised them to do something, and I would try my best to accomplish it.  I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.  
In addition, I'm conscientious about my study, and I would also spend my free time listening to English music and watching English movies to enhance my English listening.  I enjoy playing volleyball with my classmates very much.  When I playing volleyball with them, I would fell so joyful. After a day hard studying, this can help me to feel so much  relieved. I always hold the sentence that don't put off what you can do toady until tomorrow as my principle. Thus, I wound never postpone my homework or the thing I have to do.  Due to this, no matter how busy I am, I would finish what I have to do before I go to bed.

School life-revised

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School.  English is my favorite subject; therefore, I choose English as my major.  I develop a passion for English.  Even I always get into trouble while studying English; I still try hard to conquer my shortcomings. 
Besides, I had been the class English assistant for one year and I had learned a lot from how to be a responsible English assistant. I liked to discuss and share the experience of learning English with my classmates. We often read magazines then discussed its contents. Although we found it’s hard to understand the content, we encouraged each other not to give up.    
 Besides English, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I have been very active in school activities. I took part in volleyball and basketball competition.  We won the second place and third place respectively. I love reading, writing, music and movies.  As to my personality, I am creative, optimistic, determined, willing to help others.
During my high school life, I served as a vice class leader for one semester. I have to help class leader and teacher and sometimes I have to deal with some students' chores.  I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level.  After that, I took the intermediate level of GEPT.

Family Background-revised

My name is Hsiao, Yi-Wen and I was born in an ordinary but wonderful family in Tainan. There are three people in my family, mother, father and I. I am the only child in my family, so I would train myself to be more independent. My father always tells me that I should do everything with all my efforts for fear of regretting. Whenever I get into trouble, I will relentlessly ask myself  if I do my best. If not,  I would try to solve the  problem again.  My mother is a gentle and  kind-hearted person, and she has taught me a lot of methods about  how to get along with other people.  Besides, she certainly has great influence on me, and I always look up to her. Her passion and dedication to family are the best things she gives me. She never forces me to do anything I don't like to do. She gives me much freedom of choice. That's why I can develop my hobbies on my own.

school life

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School.  English is my favorite subject; therefore, I choose English as my major.  I develop a passion for English.  Even I always get into trouble while studying English; I still try hard to conquer my shortcomings. 
Besides, I had been the class English assistant for one year and I had learned a lot from how to be a responsible English assistant. I liked to discuss and share the experience of learning English with my classmates. We often read magazine then discussed its contents. Although we found it’s hard to understand the content, we encouraged each other not to give up.    
 Besides English, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I have been very active in school activities. I took part in volleyball and basketball competition.  We won the second place and third place respectively. I love reading, writing, music and movies.  As to my personality, I am creative, optimistic, determined, willing to help others.
During my high school life, I served as a vice class leader for one semester. I have to help class leader and teacher and sometimes I have to deal with some students' chores.  I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level.  After that, I took the intermediate level of GEPT.

Family Background

My name is Hsiao, Yi-Wen and I was born in an ordinary but wonderful family in Tainan. There are three people in my family, mom, dad and I. I am the only child in my family, so I would train myself to be more independent. My father is a  always tell me that we should do everything with all my efforts for fear of regreting. Whenever I get into trouble, I will relentlessly ask myself  if I do my best. If not, and I would try to solve the  problem again.  My mother is a gentle and  kind-hearted person, and she has taught me a lot of methods about  how to get along with other people.  Besides, she certainly has great influence on me, and I always look up to her. His passion and dedication to family are the best things she gives me. She never forces me to do anything I don't like to do. She gives me much freedom of choice. That's why I can develop my hobbies on my own.

autobiography-sample-2

  I am Tao. My English name is Angela. I am 17 years old. I am from Taipei First Girls' High School. I come from a well-to-do family. My mother passed away when I was in my first junior high year. My father is a computer engineer and remarried three years ago. My stepmother is an elementary school teacher. So I have a sweet stepbrother, who is now in the sixth grade. My grandparents live with us as well. My family get along pretty well.
    Throughout my school years, my academic results have always been pretty good, except in the second half of the first year and the first half of the second year. It is because my mother's death was such a trauma to me. It took me more than a year to get better. My father was afraid that I would turn bad after that. So he encouraged me to join many extra-curricular activities. He sent me to piano class, ballet class and art class.
    His purpose was that through music and art, I would find a way to release my pain so that my heart would be comforted. I am very grateful to my father's caring and thoughtful consideration. Ever since then, music is my spiritual guide and gradually becomes my most intimate companion. I then practice the piano very hard and make up my mind to become a pianist.
    In my high school years, I have taken any chance to participate in school activities. I join the choir and jazz club, both clubs offering plenty of contests and performances for many occasions. We have won many contests and had been invited by the Mayor to perform in City Hall. I am also the member of art club, for I enjoy sketching and painting very much.
    Every time when I have chance, I would go to the music theater to listen to symphony and orchestra performances. There is not once I would not be moved by the music. I really admire those musicians' talent, passion and dedication to music. I wish one day I would be able to become one of them, performing on the stage and touring around the world. That's my passion and expectation to myself. I hope you would give me a chance to fulfill it.

autobiography-sample-1

  I am Lin. Sophia is my English name. I am 18 years old, studying in a public high school. I come from a very happy middle-class family. My father works in a bank and my mother works in a bookstore. I am the only child in the family; however, I am not the so-called spoiled child. My parents have trained me to be independent since I was a child.
    Throughout my academic years, I not only get good grades but also am very active on sport field and involved in school club activities. I play volleyball and enjoy the team spirit we have. I have joined the drama club and participated in many English speech contests. I really enjoy participating in school activities; I not only make many friends and have lots of fun but also gain many different valuable experiences.
    I had been the class English assistant for almost three years. I liked to discuss and share the experience of learning English with people a lot. We often read China Post and Time Magazine then discussed their contents, the word usages and practice speaking English by discussing the articles we read. In the beginning, we found it hard because we could rarely understand the content, but we encouraged each other not to give up. Gradually, we had made improvement. We were so excited. Then the group discussion of English books and magazines became one of the most enjoyable thing for us to do every week. I won the first prize in the school English speech contest in my second year of high school and many of my English articles had been put on Students Post.
    My fondness for English has been developed since my childhood. It is lonely to be the only child. I had no one to play with when I was a kid. My mother knew about this so she brought me with her all the time. Hence, bookstores became my childhood playground and books have been my playmates. Mother would show me those fancy books with cute illustrations on them. Firstly drawn by the pictures, I was curious about these strange symbols called “words.” This was my first contact with English. As I was interested in knowing what those symbol mean, my parents taught me a bit. As they felt that I was eager to learn, they got me an English tutor. Thanks to my parents, I have advantages in learning English by starting at a really early age.
    My interest in English brought me to the world of English literature. I have been enchanted by this creative world, so I decide to major in English literature. My aim is to explore the world of literature and the world of great writers, opening my eyes and cultivating my mind through this great world of literature.
    Besides English literature, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I love reading, writing, music and movies. I have my active side as well. I enjoy swimming, hiking, traveling and getting close to Nature a lot. I believe we must achieve a sense of balance in our lives. As to my personality, I am creative, optimistic, determined, willing to help others and down to earth.
    I want to be one of the literature students who has the privilege of studying great writers’ works and exploring their inner worlds, their outlook of lives, their roles as learned scholars and their influences on the world. I hope I can also make some contribution to the awareness of culture and literature in our society since its importance has been neglected.

Expressing an opinion-2-revised

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and they don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Expressing an opinion-1-revised

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments on animals should not be carried out.

Best of the semester-3

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine will have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of  drinking  too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, you may get insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxious, and nervous after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would cause a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Best of the semester-2

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments on animals should not be carried out.

Best of the semester-1

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and they don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Discussing effect-(2)-revised

The new factory has positive several effects on Action. First of all, the industry in Action would develop rapidly. In addition, the new factory would provide more opportunities of jobs to the residents there. Therefore, the residents would have a better living standard. Besides, this will bring many people to the community, and the shops there would have more income. And the economy of Action would have a significant improvement. According to the effects above, I think it is a good decision to build a factory in Action.

Discussing effect-(1)-revised

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine will have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of  drinking  too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, you may get insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxious, and nervous after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would cause a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Discussing-2

The new factory has positive several effects on Action. First of all, the industry in Action would develop rapidly. In addition, the new factory would provide more opportunities of jobs to the residents there. Therefore, the residents would have a better living standard. Besides, this will bring many people to the community, and the shops there would have more income. And the economy of Action would have a significant improvement. According to the effects above, I think it is a good decision to build a factory in Action.

Discussing effect-1

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine can have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, it affects insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxiety, and nervousness after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would case a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Contrasting-(2)-revised

I would hire Debra for the job for several reasons. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Second, Debra has more employment experience than Lynn.  Therefore, she may have enough experience to assume the job. Besides,she had published "English Verb Tenses" in Shoetman Publishing Company, and this publication also proves his English ability. According to these reasons, I consider that Debra has enough qualification ,and I wound choose her to be a new instructor for my school.

Comparing-(3)-revised

Belly and Anna are both my friends, and there are several similarities between them. First of all, they both live in Kaohsiung. Second, Belly majors in English. Likewise, Anna majors in English. Third, Belly is allergic to seafood. Similarly,Anna is allergic to seafood. Besides, Belly's birthday is on the same date as Anna's.  Furthermore, both Belly and Anna keep dogs in ther houses. Next, Belly is very nice to get alone with,and so is Anna. I can hardly believe I have two friend who are so similar to each other. And I'm so happy that I have two nice friends like them.

DiscuDiscussing Cause - 1

Over the past 150 years there has been a huge increase in population. And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. One reason is that the medicine and health care advance, and less people would die of disease. Another reason is that we have better sanitation so that some infectious disease such as malaria would reduce. Besides, people improved farming methods that produce more and better food; therefore, people don’t have to worry about the shortage of food provisions. In addition, there are fewer infant deaths and more people living longer, so the popularity would increase continuously. The reasons above are why there has been a huge increase in population.

Discussing Cause - 2 ( Out of Business )

Mr. Williams closed his shop, and I found several reasons for why the business failed. One reason is that the store is located next to the lobby on the ground floor of the Fairfax Apartment Building. Yet, it is 3miles away from a shopping center that has two large music stores, and less people would expend their in this store. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock, but most of residents there are at the age of 51 to 60 And they may not like to listen to hip-hop and rock music. Besides, the expense of hiring clerks is too much, and it is hard to make both end meet.  In addition, the shop was open Monday to Friday from 10 to 5p.m. However, the time people who walk past the store are less than other time. Last, the store is not accept checks or credic cards, and it would reduce the people who want to expend. These reasons are why the business failed.

comparing-(2)-revised

There are two ladies hoodies, one is from Lourie's, and the other is from Green's. First, these two are both machine washable.  And Lourie's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. Similarly, Green's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. In addition, Lourie's as well as Green's has red, navy, white and green color.  Besides, the price of  Lourie's is $34.99; likewise,the price of  Green's is $34.99. Last, they both provide sizes from 4 to14.

comparing-(1)-revised

Comparing to two Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were very similar in several ways. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important people in Americans. And they both delegated to the Continental Congress. Besides, John studied and practiced law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practiced law. In addition, John as well as Thomas were singers. Last, they died on the same date. What a coincidence that they are alike in several ways.

Expressing an opinion-1

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments in which animals are used should not be carried out.

Expressing an opinion-2

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and we don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Why Is English Important? -revised

English is important for some reasons.  First of all, English is an international language that is commonly used. You can communicate with the foreigners by it.   Second, most of schools would enroll students by English abilities.  We can take part in GEPT or IELTS to obtain English certificates and prove our ability.   Besides, English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary.  Last but not the least, if you learn English,  you would be more competitive than those who only understand one language.

Contrasting-1

I'm looking for an apartment,and there are descriptions of two apartments on the Net. There are several difference between them. First of all,there two large bedroom in Fairfax Apartments,while there are only a bedroom in CAMPUS APT. Second, Fairfax is furished,whereas CAMPUS is unfurnished.   Besides,pets are'nt allow in Fairfax. However, pets are aloow in CAMPUS.  Next, the rent for per month in Fairfax is $1250 while the rent in Campus is ony $900 plus utilities. I would prefer CAMPUS APT than Fairfax Apartments. It's because that the rent is much more cheaper than another.

Comparing-3

Belly and Anna are both my friends, and they are several similarities between them. First of all, they both live in Kaohsiung. Second, Belly majors in English. Likewise, Anna majors in English. Third, Belly is allergic to seafood. Similarly,Anna is allergic to seafood. Besides, Belly's birthday is on the same date as Anna's.  Furthermore, both Belly and Anna keep dogs in ther houses. Next, Belly is very nice to get alone with,and so is Anna. I can hardly believe I have two friend who are so similar to each other. And I'm so happy that I had two nice friends like them.

Contrasting-2

I would hire Debra for the job for several reasons. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Second, Debra has more employment experience than Lynn.  Therefore, she may have enough experience to assume the job. Beside,she had published "English Verb Tenses in Shoetman Publishing Company, and this publication also prove his English ability. According to these reason, I consider that Debra have enough qualification ,and I wound choose her to be a new instructor for my school.

Describing a person-revised

My younger sister and I went to the SHIN KONG MITSUKOSHI department store last Saturday.  But she got lost when I didn't keep an eye on her. Please help me to find her as soon as possible. Her name is Amy, and she is ten years old.  She is medium height and a little thin.  Then she has big eyes, and she wears a pair of  glasses. She has long and curly hair.  When she is smiling, there are dimples on her face. Besides, she wore a pink dress and  yellow sandals when she got lost. If you see her, please call me immediately. My number is 2000-000.

comparing-2

There are two ladies hoodies, one is from Lourie's, and the other is from Green's. First, these two are both machine washable.  And Lourie's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. Similarly, Green's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. In addition, Lourie's as well as Green's have red, navy, white and green color.  Besides, the price of  Lourie's is $34.99; likewise,the price of  Green's is $34.99. Last, they both provide sizes from 4 to14.

comparing-1

Comparing to two Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important people in Americans. And they both delegated to the Continental Congress. Besides, John studied and practice law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practice law. In addition, John as well as Thomas were singers. Last, they died on the same date.

Why Is English Important?

English is important for some reasons.  First of all, English is an International language that is commonly used. You can communicate with the foreigners by it.   Second, most of schools would enroll students by English ability.  We can take part in GEPT or IELTS to obtain English certificates and prove our ability.   Besides, English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary.  Last but not the least, if you learn English, and you would be more competitive than those who only understand one language.

How to plan a party -revised 1

You can follow these tips to plan a perfect party.  First of all, select a theme for your own party.  After you decide what kind of party you would like to hold, prepare some items which are relative to your party. Like some decorations or dessert which will make your party perfect. Then, plan a schedule that would help you control your party more easily.  Besides, invite some people to take part in this party. Last but not least, be a friendly host during the party. Follow these tips and you can plan a nice party.

Describing a person

My younger sister and I went to the SHIN KONG MITSUKOSHI department store last Saturday.  But she got lost when I didn't keep an eye on her. Please help me to find her as soon as possible. Her name is Amy, and she is ten years old.  She is medium height and a little thin.  Then she has big eyes, and she wears a pair of  glasses. She has long and curly hair.  When she is smile, there are dimples on her face. Besides, she wears a pink dress and  yellow sandals when she got lost. If you see her, please call me immediately. My number is 2000-000.

How to plan a party

You can do the following tips to plan a perfect party.  First of all, select a theme for your own party.  After you decide what kind of party you would like to hold, prepare some items which are relative to your party. Like some decorations or dessert which will make your party perfect. Then, plan a schedule that would help you control your party more easily.  Besides, invite some people to take part in this party. The last but not least, being a friendly host during the party. Follow these tips and you must can plan a nice party.

Explaining a process-3

If you want to go to the Free Quaker Meeting House, you can  follow these directions.  Firstly, go north one block from the Third street. Then turn left on Chestnut Street.  Next, turn right on the Fifth Street. Continue one block on the Fifth Street. Finally, you will find  the Free Quaker Meeting House is on your left.

Explaining a process-2

If you don't know how to prove that black is a better collector of solar energy than white, and you can following steps.  First of all, you have to prepare 2 tin cans, a black and a white paint and a room thermometer.  Then paint the cans-one black and one white. Next, fill the cans with water. After that, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours. Additionally, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare. Finally, you will see that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher. The experiment prove that black is a better collector of solar energy than white.

Explaining a process-1

It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure.  First of all, cover bottom of pot with small stones.  Then you can put two inches of soil on top of rock.  After that, make a hole in center of soil.  Additionally, drop plant into soil.  Besides, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot. Also, press soil down with thumbs. Last of all, water the plant.  If you follow the step correctly, and you can pot  a plant more easily.

The Most Embarrassing Moment -revised 1

The most embarrassing moment in my life happened when I was an elementary school student. One day, I attended a competition to make a speech. This was my first time to stand on the stage in public, and I tried to calm down. But I was so scared that I kept trembling. Soon, it was my turn to make a speech. And I tried my best to make the speech perfect. After finishing the performance, I walked down the stage with pleasure. Because of my carelessness, I fell down from the stairs.  Afterward, everyone started laughing at me; I was so ashamed that I wanted to find a place to hide into. This is the most embarrassing moment in my life, whenever I think of that moment, and I still feel so abashed.

The Most embarrassing Moment

The most embarrassing moment in my life happened when I was an elementary school student. I even feel very embarrassed when I think of it. At that time, I had attended a competition to make a speech. This was my first time to stand on the stage in public, and I tried to calm down. But I was so scared that I kept trembling. Soon, it was my turn to make a speech. And I tried my best to make the speech seem perfect. After finishing the performance, I walked down the stage with pleasure.  Because of carelessness, I fell down from the stairs.  And everyone started laughing at me; I was so ashamed that I wanted to find a place to hide into. This was the most embarrassing moment in my life, whenever I think of that moment, and I still fell so abashed.

A Dream I have Had -revised 1

There is the most horror dream that I have ever had.  In my dream, I came to school as usual.  When I went to my classroom, no one was there. I thought that it must have something wrong. Then, I began to find if there was anyone here. It's getting dark; I didn't want to stay in such a terrible place like here, so I tried to find the exit. But, I noticed that someone was walking behind me.  I was so afraid that I began to run until I couldn't hear his footstep. At the end, I regarded that I had got away from the strange person, so I stopped and turned around. Suddenly, a hand caught me, and I shouted loudly. Afterward, I woke up by the nightmare. There was nothing happened. I was so glad that it was just a dream. But something was weird. To my surprise, a red handprint was on my arm.

A Dream I have Had

There is the most horror dream that I have ever had.  In my dream, I came to school as usual.  I went to my class room, but no one was there. I thougt that it's must have something wrong. Afterward, I began to find if there was anyone here. It's getting dark, I didn't want to stay in such a terror place like here, so I  tried to find the exit. But, I noticed that someone was walked behind me.  I was so afraid that I began to run until
I couldn't heard his footstep in my back. In the end, I regarded that I had get away from the strange person, so I stopped. Next, a hand was catched me, and I shouted loudly. Finally, I woke up. There was nothing happened. I was so glad that it's just a dream.  But something was weird. To my surprise, a red handprint was on my arm.