2011年4月20日 星期三
Why Is English Important?
English is important for some reasons. First of all, English is an International language that is commonly used. You can communicate with the foreigners by it. Second, most of schools would enroll students by English ability. We can take part in GEPT or IELTS to obtain English certificates and prove our ability. Besides, English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary. Last but not the least, if you learn English, and you would be more competitive than those who only understand one language.
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1.international可以不用大寫
回覆刪除2.You can communicate with foreigners in English.
by it有點怪
3.Last~if you learn English, and you would~ language. and要去掉要不然會有兩個連接詞
4.沒有結尾句
5.enroll可以這樣用嗎?
(可以翻翻字典的用法...)
6.Besides, English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary.
恩..這句我不太懂耶~
甚麼是specific professions?
if you learn English, and you would be more competitive than those who only understand one language. 不用and吧!
回覆刪除ability要不要說是哪些能力,就比如口語能力還是閱讀或甚麼
ability可以數唷
回覆刪除if you learn English, and you would be more competitive 其中的and不用加喔!
Last but not the least~one language.這句是結論句的話要不要把淚死特~例死特去掉?
回覆刪除大家大概都把錯誤挑出來了
回覆刪除我覺得
語意可以在更明確點
有些句子會看不太懂
例如 English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary
第二行後面by it有點怪...
回覆刪除第四行的ability應該要複數
然後可以補充說明
oral,writing,reading,listening等...
倒數第二句if...,不用+and~