Discussing effect-(2)-revised

The new factory has positive several effects on Action. First of all, the industry in Action would develop rapidly. In addition, the new factory would provide more opportunities of jobs to the residents there. Therefore, the residents would have a better living standard. Besides, this will bring many people to the community, and the shops there would have more income. And the economy of Action would have a significant improvement. According to the effects above, I think it is a good decision to build a factory in Action.