2011年4月6日 星期三
How to plan a party
You can do the following tips to plan a perfect party. First of all, select a theme for your own party. After you decide what kind of party you would like to hold, prepare some items which are relative to your party. Like some decorations or dessert which will make your party perfect. Then, plan a schedule that would help you control your party more easily. Besides, invite some people to take part in this party. The last but not least, being a friendly host during the party. Follow these tips and you must can plan a nice party.
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沒什麼錯=ˇ=
回覆刪除倒數第二句
回覆刪除The last but not least
我記得開頭好像沒有"the"耶
有點不確定...
可以去翻翻文法A本XD"
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最後一句用and連結好像怪怪
改成,then會不會比較好A_A
句子後面有兩個助動詞似乎怪怪的??
要不要把"must"去掉看會不會比較通順~
~you must can plan a nice party. must要不要改成surely放到句尾或can後面看看會不會比較通順吧 :D
回覆刪除然後其他不錯
第一句的do要不要改別的詞~總覺得do好不順~
回覆刪除其他沒什麼大問題啦!
或許可以寫找誰幫忙或多加一點動作~這樣文章比較長~
The last but not least, being a friendly host during the party.這句沒有動詞!
回覆刪除第三行的like some decoration~可以和前面的句子合在一起喲~
回覆刪除而倒數最後兩行的The last but not least, being a friendly host during the party.
being要改成be 要不然沒有動詞喲!!
另外，應該是last but not the least~
給你參考嚕!!
( being a friendly host during the party)改成be!!
回覆刪除must can~~兩個助動詞喔!!!!
最後一句要不要改成By following比較好呢?
回覆刪除其他大家都講完囉!!