2011年6月1日 星期三

DiscuDiscussing Cause - 1

Over the past 150 years there has been a huge increase in population. And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. One reason is that the medicine and health care advance, and less people would die of disease. Another reason is that we have better sanitation so that some infectious disease such as malaria would reduce. Besides, people improved farming methods that produce more and better food; therefore, people don’t have to worry about the shortage of food provisions. In addition, there are fewer infant deaths and more people living longer, so the popularity would increase continuously. The reasons above are why there has been a huge increase in population.

5 則留言:

  1. 標題第一個字是Discussing
    And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change.
    -->And the following are the reasons why caused the significant change.
    怎麼這篇後面跟如芸的一樣...?

    回覆刪除
  2. *And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. is→are 動詞要隨著後面的reasons變化

    回覆刪除
  3. 最後一點好像跟第一點一樣
    都屬於藥物以及醫療的進步~

    回覆刪除
  4. 開頭要空格唷~!
    there are fewer infant deaths and more people living longer
    and如果連接是兩個動詞,那後面的living要改成live喔~!
    感覺這樣看起來比較順!!

    回覆刪除
  5. 你的標題是跳針嗎?
    And the following is the reasons why caused the ~. is -> are
    康門你去暈暈那邊看好了因為你們的一樣

    回覆刪除