Over the past 150 years there has been a huge increase in population. And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. One reason is that the medicine and health care advance, and less people would die of disease. Another reason is that we have better sanitation so that some infectious disease such as malaria would reduce. Besides, people improved farming methods that produce more and better food; therefore, people don’t have to worry about the shortage of food provisions. In addition, there are fewer infant deaths and more people living longer, so the popularity would increase continuously. The reasons above are why there has been a huge increase in population.
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怎麼這篇後面跟如芸的一樣...?
*And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. is→are 動詞要隨著後面的reasons變化
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回覆刪除都屬於藥物以及醫療的進步~
開頭要空格唷~!
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and如果連接是兩個動詞,那後面的living要改成live喔~!
感覺這樣看起來比較順!!
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康門你去暈暈那邊看好了因為你們的一樣