Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine can have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems. Furthermore, it affects insomnia. People would feel much more excited, anxiety, and nervousness after drinking too much caffeine. In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would case a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.
1.第2句的can改will比較好吧!
回覆刪除2.Here are some of the effects of too much caffeine.這裡是不是有漏打~
Here are some effects of drinking too much caffeine.
3.it affects insomnia 改 you may get insomnia
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4.anxiety 和 nervousness 要改成adj.
5.用meant?不懂? 後面case要改cause
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回覆刪除除了其他人的建議就沒什麼問題了~
回覆刪除國雯建議都給完了
回覆刪除就也找不到其他需要建議的地方
*anxiety, and nervousness →anxious and nervous
回覆刪除*All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would case a lot of disease on us.→All of these effects "mean" that drinking too much caffeine "will cause" a lot of diseases "to" us.
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回覆刪除然後可以多一點說明
改一下上面的comment
回覆刪除will cause us a lot of diseases或是will cause us to get a lot of diseases。