Expressing an opinion-2-revised

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and they don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Expressing an opinion-1-revised

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments on animals should not be carried out.

Best of the semester-3

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine will have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of  drinking  too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, you may get insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxious, and nervous after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would cause a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Best of the semester-2

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments on animals should not be carried out.

Best of the semester-1

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and they don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Discussing effect-(2)-revised

The new factory has positive several effects on Action. First of all, the industry in Action would develop rapidly. In addition, the new factory would provide more opportunities of jobs to the residents there. Therefore, the residents would have a better living standard. Besides, this will bring many people to the community, and the shops there would have more income. And the economy of Action would have a significant improvement. According to the effects above, I think it is a good decision to build a factory in Action.

Discussing effect-(1)-revised

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine will have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of  drinking  too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, you may get insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxious, and nervous after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would cause a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Discussing-2

The new factory has positive several effects on Action. First of all, the industry in Action would develop rapidly. In addition, the new factory would provide more opportunities of jobs to the residents there. Therefore, the residents would have a better living standard. Besides, this will bring many people to the community, and the shops there would have more income. And the economy of Action would have a significant improvement. According to the effects above, I think it is a good decision to build a factory in Action.

Discussing effect-1

Drinking a moderate of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine can have negative effects on your heath. Here are some of the effects of too much caffeine. First of all, it leads to fast or irregular heartbeat. And it also causes nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Furthermore, it affects insomnia.  People would feel much more excited, anxiety, and nervousness after drinking too much caffeine.  In addition, it results in muscle tremors, and physiological disorder. All of these effects meant that drinking too much caffeine would case a lot of disease on us. Therefore, we shouldn’t assimilate too much caffeine.

Contrasting-(2)-revised

I would hire Debra for the job for several reasons. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Second, Debra has more employment experience than Lynn.  Therefore, she may have enough experience to assume the job. Besides,she had published "English Verb Tenses" in Shoetman Publishing Company, and this publication also proves his English ability. According to these reasons, I consider that Debra has enough qualification ,and I wound choose her to be a new instructor for my school.

Comparing-(3)-revised

Belly and Anna are both my friends, and there are several similarities between them. First of all, they both live in Kaohsiung. Second, Belly majors in English. Likewise, Anna majors in English. Third, Belly is allergic to seafood. Similarly,Anna is allergic to seafood. Besides, Belly's birthday is on the same date as Anna's.  Furthermore, both Belly and Anna keep dogs in ther houses. Next, Belly is very nice to get alone with,and so is Anna. I can hardly believe I have two friend who are so similar to each other. And I'm so happy that I have two nice friends like them.

DiscuDiscussing Cause - 1

Over the past 150 years there has been a huge increase in population. And the following is the reasons why caused the significant change. One reason is that the medicine and health care advance, and less people would die of disease. Another reason is that we have better sanitation so that some infectious disease such as malaria would reduce. Besides, people improved farming methods that produce more and better food; therefore, people don’t have to worry about the shortage of food provisions. In addition, there are fewer infant deaths and more people living longer, so the popularity would increase continuously. The reasons above are why there has been a huge increase in population.

Discussing Cause - 2 ( Out of Business )

Mr. Williams closed his shop, and I found several reasons for why the business failed. One reason is that the store is located next to the lobby on the ground floor of the Fairfax Apartment Building. Yet, it is 3miles away from a shopping center that has two large music stores, and less people would expend their in this store. Another reason is that most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock, but most of residents there are at the age of 51 to 60 And they may not like to listen to hip-hop and rock music. Besides, the expense of hiring clerks is too much, and it is hard to make both end meet.  In addition, the shop was open Monday to Friday from 10 to 5p.m. However, the time people who walk past the store are less than other time. Last, the store is not accept checks or credic cards, and it would reduce the people who want to expend. These reasons are why the business failed.

comparing-(2)-revised

There are two ladies hoodies, one is from Lourie's, and the other is from Green's. First, these two are both machine washable.  And Lourie's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. Similarly, Green's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. In addition, Lourie's as well as Green's has red, navy, white and green color.  Besides, the price of  Lourie's is $34.99; likewise,the price of  Green's is $34.99. Last, they both provide sizes from 4 to14.

comparing-(1)-revised

Comparing to two Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were very similar in several ways. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important people in Americans. And they both delegated to the Continental Congress. Besides, John studied and practiced law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practiced law. In addition, John as well as Thomas were singers. Last, they died on the same date. What a coincidence that they are alike in several ways.