2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an opinion-1

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments in which animals are used should not be carried out.

6 則留言:

  1. carry out大多是以人作主詞唷

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  2. * it is obvious that laboratory experiments in which animals are used should not be carried out. →it is obvious that laboratory experiments on/with animals should not be carried out.用介係詞就可以簡單明瞭表示你的意思了!
    上面的應該沒看清楚你寫的句子...因為你原本就用被動式,所以我覺得你是對的唷~

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  3. to do some cruel medical experiments
    改 by doing such cruel medical experiments會不會比較好~
    Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals.
    看不太懂~= =

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  4. 看的懂也沒有什麼問題

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