2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an opinion-2

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and we don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

6 則留言:

  1. prefer to wear their clothes to go to school
    -->prefer to wear their clothes rather than go to school
    感覺第一個論點和第二個是一樣的~可以再另外想一個比較不模稜兩可的idea:)

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  2. *I think students should wear uniforms to go to school.我覺得go to 可以省略。
    *靜諦好像寫錯了...我覺得你原本寫的沒錯!而 go to 就看你要不要留拉~
    *要注意一下你的人稱,第三行你用they而第四行你用we。

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  3. 我喜歡你的第3個論點
    可是用fairness有點怪怪的~

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  4. 蠻流暢的
    只是開頭是不是該有空格...

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  5. 看到fairness會有點小小疑惑,要不要換一下字?

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