Expressing an opinion-1

Many people insist that it's necessary to use animals in laboratory experiments, but I disagree with it for the following reasons. First of all, we can’t deprive the animals of their lives. These animals have the rights to live as humans do, and nobody can take others lives to do some cruel medical experiments. Besides, animals are different from humans in many ways. Therefore, we can’t make sure if these experiments would have the same effects on humans.  Furthermore, immoral scientists would do some experiments which can be avoided on animals. Thousands of animals die of these dispensable experiments every year. In light of all the points mentioned, it is obvious that laboratory experiments in which animals are used should not be carried out.

Expressing an opinion-2

I think students should wear uniforms to go to school. Although some students prefer to wear their clothes to go to school, I strongly believe that uniforms are better than their clothes. First of all, wearing uniforms is convenient, and we don’t have to worry about what to wear tomorrow. In addition, students should concentrate on their schoolwork instead of thinking about what to wear. Besides, uniforms represent fairness. Every student has to wear the same clothes; therefore, there’s no difference between the rich and the poor. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that uniforms are applicable to students.

Why Is English Important? -revised

English is important for some reasons.  First of all, English is an international language that is commonly used. You can communicate with the foreigners by it.   Second, most of schools would enroll students by English abilities.  We can take part in GEPT or IELTS to obtain English certificates and prove our ability.   Besides, English is also essential for us to make some specific professions, such as an interpreter or a secretary.  Last but not the least, if you learn English,  you would be more competitive than those who only understand one language.

Contrasting-1

I'm looking for an apartment,and there are descriptions of two apartments on the Net. There are several difference between them. First of all,there two large bedroom in Fairfax Apartments,while there are only a bedroom in CAMPUS APT. Second, Fairfax is furished,whereas CAMPUS is unfurnished.   Besides,pets are'nt allow in Fairfax. However, pets are aloow in CAMPUS.  Next, the rent for per month in Fairfax is $1250 while the rent in Campus is ony $900 plus utilities. I would prefer CAMPUS APT than Fairfax Apartments. It's because that the rent is much more cheaper than another.

Comparing-3

Belly and Anna are both my friends, and they are several similarities between them. First of all, they both live in Kaohsiung. Second, Belly majors in English. Likewise, Anna majors in English. Third, Belly is allergic to seafood. Similarly,Anna is allergic to seafood. Besides, Belly's birthday is on the same date as Anna's.  Furthermore, both Belly and Anna keep dogs in ther houses. Next, Belly is very nice to get alone with,and so is Anna. I can hardly believe I have two friend who are so similar to each other. And I'm so happy that I had two nice friends like them.

Contrasting-2

I would hire Debra for the job for several reasons. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Second, Debra has more employment experience than Lynn.  Therefore, she may have enough experience to assume the job. Beside,she had published "English Verb Tenses in Shoetman Publishing Company, and this publication also prove his English ability. According to these reason, I consider that Debra have enough qualification ,and I wound choose her to be a new instructor for my school.

Describing a person-revised

My younger sister and I went to the SHIN KONG MITSUKOSHI department store last Saturday.  But she got lost when I didn't keep an eye on her. Please help me to find her as soon as possible. Her name is Amy, and she is ten years old.  She is medium height and a little thin.  Then she has big eyes, and she wears a pair of  glasses. She has long and curly hair.  When she is smiling, there are dimples on her face. Besides, she wore a pink dress and  yellow sandals when she got lost. If you see her, please call me immediately. My number is 2000-000.

comparing-2

There are two ladies hoodies, one is from Lourie's, and the other is from Green's. First, these two are both machine washable.  And Lourie's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. Similarly, Green's ladies hoodies are cotton blend. In addition, Lourie's as well as Green's have red, navy, white and green color.  Besides, the price of  Lourie's is $34.99; likewise,the price of  Green's is $34.99. Last, they both provide sizes from 4 to14.

comparing-1

Comparing to two Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important people in Americans. And they both delegated to the Continental Congress. Besides, John studied and practice law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practice law. In addition, John as well as Thomas were singers. Last, they died on the same date.