I will still choose English as my major in college. Because I have a strong interest in English, and I hope I can make great progress in studying English, and strengthen my English communication ability after I go to a university. And I think Department of English, National Taipei University of Technology is my best choice for me, and I sincerely hope that I can be admitted to your school. Besides, I consider that I can polish my English ability a lot in your university. I will make use of the four years to reinforce my English. In addition, I would also learn some different languages like Japanese and Korean.
After graduating from your college, I will pursue a career like an English teacher or a tour guide. Both of these two jobs require a lot of knowledge and a better command of English.
If I can enter Department of English, National Taipei University of Technology, I will study hard and make more efforts to sharpen my English, especially my English listening and speaking abilities. In the future, I will enhance my every aspects of study and try my best to achieve my goal step by step.
*National Taipei University of Technology is my best choice for me. for me 可以去掉
回覆刪除*開頭要控格~After graduating ~那是一段嗎??感覺有點少,自己變成段也有點怪....可能再加一些內容或是加連接詞跟上/下面那一段合併...
and strengthen my English communication ability
回覆刪除你是想打English speaking ability嗎??
你的college和university要一致喔!!!!這兩個有點不一樣