2011年10月4日 星期二

Self-Evaluation


I am an optimistic girl who always looks on the bright side.    Whenever I get into trouble, I would try hard to conquer it in order to get away from it. I do everything with all my efforts. As long as I start to do one thing, I would never give up until I think that I really do my possible. At school, I am very friendly to my friends and classmates. Besides, I am a person of  honor,  once I promised them to do something, and I would try my best to accomplish it.  I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.  
In addition, I'm conscientious about my study, and I would also spend my free time listening to English music and watching English movies to enhance my English listening.  I enjoy playing volleyball with my classmates very much.  When I playing volleyball with them, I would fell so joyful. After a day hard studying, this can help me to feel so much  relieved. I always hold the sentence that don't put off what you can do toady until tomorrow as my principle. Thus, I wound never postpone my homework or the thing I have to do.  Due to this, no matter how busy I am, I would finish what I have to do before I go to bed.

2 則留言:

  1. *in order to get away from it→ in order to cope with the problem. get away from it很怪...
    * I really do my possible ????你要表達神麼??? 你是要打best嗎??
    * I am a person of honor→I am an honest person
    * 突然寫了這句很怪,上下不連接...I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.
    * I always hold the sentence that ~sentence改belief或creed吧!!
    *句子有些連接可以在修飾一下。

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  2. 孟庭把大部分都打出來了
    I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.
    classmate要加s吧...
    When I playing volleyball with them, I would fell so joyful.
    playing→played

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