I am an optimistic girl who always looks on the bright side. Whenever I get into trouble, I would try hard to conquer it in order to get away from it. I do everything with all my efforts. As long as I start to do one thing, I would never give up until I think that I really do my possible. At school, I am very friendly to my friends and classmates. Besides, I am a person of honor, once I promised them to do something, and I would try my best to accomplish it. I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.
In addition, I'm conscientious about my study, and I would also spend my free time listening to English music and watching English movies to enhance my English listening. I enjoy playing volleyball with my classmates very much. When I playing volleyball with them, I would fell so joyful. After a day hard studying, this can help me to feel so much relieved. I always hold the sentence that don't put off what you can do toady until tomorrow as my principle. Thus, I wound never postpone my homework or the thing I have to do. Due to this, no matter how busy I am, I would finish what I have to do before I go to bed.
*in order to get away from it→ in order to cope with the problem. get away from it很怪...
回覆刪除* I really do my possible ????你要表達神麼??? 你是要打best嗎??
* I am a person of honor→I am an honest person
* 突然寫了這句很怪,上下不連接...I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.
* I always hold the sentence that ~sentence改belief或creed吧!!
*句子有些連接可以在修飾一下。
孟庭把大部分都打出來了
回覆刪除I really enjoy playing volleyball with my classmate.
classmate要加s吧...
When I playing volleyball with them, I would fell so joyful.
playing→played